Thursday, August 18, 2011
Any comma or grammatical errors?
One day, I was walking to the park, and on my way I saw a bird, a plane, and a shoe. Clearly, something had to be done. I stood there thinking, but then, I realized I should take action before it’s too late. So, I picked up the plane, and put it in my pocket. Now, all that was left, was the bird and the shoe. I decided to throw the shoe into the garbage and let the bird fly away. I continued walking to the park. Today was a strange day, and I wondered if it could even get stranger. I didn’t think so; I was wrong. I continued walking for 20 feet. I stopped. I saw the following: a toaster walking, an oven eating, and a microwave reading. I wondered to whom all these kitchen appliances belonged. Then, I remembered that the toaster and oven were my brother’s. Just last week, he told me he bought a toaster that could walk and an oven that could eat. Now, I had to figure out who owned the microwave. It was during that minute, that my friend’s dog ran over, took the reading microwave, and scurried away. I couldn’t believe what happened that day, on my way to the park. So, I turned around and went home.
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